Design and Critique #4 – Pine and Elm Display

3 point bonsai display

Display of Trees:

The trees flow well from the main tree to the sides by placing both the Elm and the companion plant in a direction that the foliage and branching suggest. The stands are also perfectly chosen to contrast the tree on top.

The flow of the Pine is directed towards the left, as is the flow of the Elm. This is shown by the defining branch on the lowest part of the tree combined with the flow of the apex of both trees. You can also see the silhouette of the apex drawing a line to the next tree.

Branching:

The literati styled Pine has a great defining branch on the left that sets the longest part of the tree. This helps it accomplish asymmetry rather than the unrealistic perfect symmetry. The trunk doesn’t have any outrageous bends, but has consistent movement which fits nicely with the literati style.

The Elm has good branching, but the taper from the thick trunk to the smaller branches lets you know that it was developed from a larger trunk chop. I would love to see this same display in Fall to see the yellow elm leaves combined with that fantastic blue pot.

Comments:

I love the display stands for this display. Well chosen and very fitting for the accompanying trees.

The feminine pot is a perfect elegant choice for the pine tree. Flowing rim of the pot with a tapered bottom enhances the movements of the tree without dominating the display.

The Elm has a nontraditional lower branch on the left, but I like it. It really helps to balance the tree and serve as a defining branch. Whether intentional or not, it seems to be the connecting piece to the companion plant as it flows right to it.

Next Up:

Winter Bonsai Display